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1. A map that shows a comparison对比类
2. A map that shows development of an area发展类
地理变迁:(剑 14-page 94 有范文)
地理选址:(剑5-page 75 有范文,没有让考生进行选择,只是比较不同地址自身的优缺点)
1.用自己的话重写介绍句
The two pictures compare the current layout of…with a plan to redesign the same…
2.数出有几处改变,找出主要改变的地方,找出相似之处或没有改变的地方
We can see that new design proposal involves making a number of changes to the… mainly in the…
There are no plans to change…
3.最明显的改变:哪一个地方改变了,是怎么做到的,给这一区域带来什么影响(仍旧保留的是什么)
The most noticeable change from the existing to the proposed floor plan is that…
This will be achieved by…
With no…,the proposed…will…
4.其他改变(拆除后,新建了什么);新建的地方是什么在哪里,怎么做到的;其它不明显或较小的改变
To replace the current…,a new… will be installed in…
Sth, will also be replaced with sth
Finally,the planned building work will also include the installation of…
The two pictures compare the current layout of the ground floor of a house with a plan to redesign the same living spaceCurrent layout=existing plan A plan to redesign…=proposed plan
介绍地图:两个图片将当前对…的布局和重新设计这一区域的设计图进行了对比The two pictures compare the current layout of…with a plan to redesign the same…
We can see that the new design proposal involves making a number of changes to the ground floor of the house,mainly in the central hall area. There are no plans to change external walls or entrances.
先说有明显改变的地方,再说没有改变的地方,重点看平面图中改变最大的区域(hall)We can see that the new design proposal involves making a number of changes to the…mainly in the…There are no plans to change…
The most noticeable change from the existing to the proposed floor plan is that there will no longer be a separate hall area when the building work has been done. This will be achieved by removing the internal wall and door between the hall and living room,along with the current staircase and under-stair storage cupboard. With no separate hall area,the proposed living room will also contain the staircase to the first floor.
最明显的改变(原有的哪里拆除了),哪一个地方改变了,是怎么做到的,给这一区域带来什么影响(仍旧保留的是什么)
现有的平面图和提议的平面图的最明显的改变是建筑工作完成后,不再有一个单独的大厅了
通过移除大厅和客厅之间的内墙和门,以及现有的楼梯和楼梯下的储藏橱柜,就可以实现
没有了单独的大厅,客厅还是包含到达二层的楼梯The most noticeable change from the existing to the proposed floor plan is that…This will be achieved by…With no…,the proposed…will…
To replace the current straight staircase,a new set of winding stairs will be installed in the corner of the living room.The internal door between the hall and kitchen will also be replaced with double doors connecting the kitchen with the new living room.Finally, the planned building work will also include the installation of some kitchen furniture
其它改变(拆除后,新建了什么):新建的地方是什么在哪里,怎么做到的,其它不明显或较小的改变。
替换当前的直线型楼梯,新的旋梯将会被安装在客厅的角落。
大厅和厨房之间的内门也将被连接厨房和新客厅的双开门替换。
最后,提议的建筑工作也包含安置一些厨房家具。To replace the current…, a new …will be installed in…Sth ,will also be replaced with sthFinally,the planned building work will also include the installation of…
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1.转述介绍句
The map shows the growth of…called…+时间
The growth of a village=development
2.先概括发展总趋势(随着交通设施的改善而发展)
再说明一共有几个阶段的发展(Four periods of development are shown on the map)
以及最明显的特征(每个居民区在主干道,铁路或高速公路附近)
It is clear that…
Four periods of development are shown on the map,and…
3.按照时间顺序,介绍发展,注意一定要涵盖平面图上标注的地名
4.继续按照时间介绍,介绍发展,注意一定要涵盖平面图上标注的地名
The two drawings demonstrate the changes of the same island before and after the construction of some transport and service buildings.可以简要概括发展后的最明显突出的变化
Before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach in the west. In addition, some tress were cultivated in the western side and eastern side of the area.
After the construction, great differences can be observed on the island. A swimming area is established near the beach, connected with a newly-built accommodation block which is around the trees in the west by a footpath. In the center of the island lies another larger accommodation unit, which is linked by a footpath into a circle in the same way as the western one.
Between these two lodging places, there is a central reception block surrounded by a vehicle track. This track extends northwards to the restaurant and goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island.
Overall, comparing the two maps, there are significant differences after this development. Not only are lots of facilities built on the island, but also the sea is used for activities. The new island has become wonderful place for tourism.
一定要有关联词和方位词变化的提示语,这样会显得文章脉络清晰有条理;多用一些高级句型,比如倒装句,各种从句,独立主格结构等,要有顺序的写作,将各个不同点串联起来,不要总是写小分句,多用一些代词和连词把多个小句子整合成一个大句子。
方位介词:in包含/on相邻并接壤/to相邻不接壤
在…旁边:beside/next to/near/close to/by the side of/be adjacent to/be in the vicinity of
自…向…流:run/flow from to 在东北角:In the northeastern/In northeast corn
沿着河的下游:along the lower reaches of river 向东边扩大:extend to the east
位于:locate/situate/lie 排列:be arranged in a line/circle
变大:enlarge 扩张:extend/expand 缩水:shrink(shrunk)
拆除:pull down/be demolished/tear(torn)down/knock down
成倍:doubled/tripled 减半:disappear/vanish/be removed
腾出空间:A give way to B/A make room for B/B take place of A
变成/被改造成/被重建:be covered into/be changed into/be transformed into/be removed into/be turned into/be reconstructed/be developed
顺序连接词:Firstly,In the first step,The first step starts with…
Next,What happens next is…/After…/when sth is done…/The second stage/next step is…
…is the last step in the procedure/In the final phase
生产/制作:make/produce/manufacture/generate/create
分开/切割:split/separate/cut
扔掉/丢弃:remove/throw away/dispose of
分类:classify into/sort into/categorize
分配:distribute 加热:heat up 冷却:cool down 蒸发:evaporate
溶解:dissolve 融化:melt 放置:put/place 形成:form into/shape into
打包:pack 运输:transport/deliver 基于:based on/according to
打碎:smash into/break into 挖:dig 落入:fall onto
流程图就是专业版看图说话,提供图文信息给你,让你根据图文信息写一篇流程介绍。唯一的难点是出现太多专业生词看不懂图;但其实一般雅思的考题都是生活常识,因此就算出现生词,考生也基本可以通过图画信息猜出来生词的大致意思。以至于你只要能够看懂流程图的阶段信息,即图上一共是几个阶段,你就能顺利写作。
流程图常规的四段式写作:
一句话介绍流程图的背景(稍微改写题干即可),可以固定一个被动开头的句型。
概括图上一共有几个阶段,包括哪些步骤。在说明有哪些步骤的时候,针对具体的图,有一些不同分数段的写法。
把图上步骤按顺序分为a/b两个段去描写。按照顺序写,强调清楚流程图的阶段信息,每一个阶段都能完整给出图文信息,使用被动语态避免使用主体,使用代词衔接使得前后内容连贯。
段落写作重点是在描述段中,对阶段信息的突出体现,让读者明确的知道,你描述到图上的第几个步骤了,而不是红红火火恍恍惚惚一直"然后然后然后"也不知道你写到哪儿了,这样就很麻烦。工序图主要为被动语态,一般没有时间生长图主要为主动语态,每个生长阶段都会涉及时间
开头段:改写题目 The diagram shows/illustrates how/that...
第一阶段:The second stage /During the initial stage/At the beginning of the whole cycle...,... is subsequently ......
第二阶段:The second stage is/In the process of/In the next step......
第三阶段:In the final phase/Entering the final phase/(动名词or名词)is the last step in the procedure,......
结尾段:总结 To summarise/In summary/Overall比较难易:...is simple...点明区别:There are substantial differences between.https://www.zhihu.com/tardis/bd/There are remarkable changes in...
开头段:改写题目 The diagram shows/illustrates how/that...+几个阶段
2-3段落描述:......begin life as/At the first stage/During the initial stage/At the beginning of the whole cycle......
第一阶段:...is subsequently......
第二阶段:It is followed by the second stagel After...months(years)......
第三阶段:The third stage is/By the time/For the next...months(years)......
第四阶段:At the final stage/Entering the final phase......
结尾段:总结 To summarise/In summary/Overall概括流程:...consists of...stages...the first stage...while the last stage...点名区别:There are substantial differences between.https://www.zhihu.com/tardis/bd/There are remarkable changes in...
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